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Good as is discourse, silence is better and shames it.


This bit of worn asphalt down near the waterfront has had plenty of work put in to drawing attention to the hazards of a crack in the footpath. Of cousre, one wonders why someone could go to all this effort, but actually avoid fixing it. Personally, it looks like overkill to me (I mean, it's been left untended for at least a month now), but I am sure that the fact it lays right on the pub crawl trail has nothing to do with the effort of looking to avoid potentially litigious drunkards.

Not long ago, I discovered the beauty and challenge of the drabble. For the uninitiated, a drabble is a work of fiction exactly one hundred words in length.

The purpose of the drabble is brevity, and it is a real test of an author's ability to express [hopefully] interesting and meaningful ideas in an extremely confined space.

As such, it may prove a useful friend to the blogger who remains pressured to find material to continue posting a couple of times a day.

So, here's a drabble I whipped out on the bus last week. I needed a bit of a fiddle to get to one hundred words, but I hope it work out!

The Conversation

He asked her plainly, “why?”

She answered tersely, “why not?”

He did not accept that this question was an answer.

She was certain that it was the only answer she had.

They had struck an impasse.

“What do I have to say to convince you?” she asked.

“Just give me a reason”, he answered.

“Isn’t desire reason enough?” she demanded.

Another question, still no answer, he remained unconvinced.

His stated misgivings did not satisfy her longing for a decision.

So, much like the last time, and the time before that, they put it aside for the next time.

Comments

G. B. Miller said…
Kool.

Nice piece of drabble.

Sort of like eavesdropping on a private conversation.
Priyanka Khot said…
the concept of drabble sounds interesting. Will give it a try for sure, and when I do would want ur comments.
Miles McClagan said…
100 words?

I can't write things that short! I'd be up to the first reference of Big Ms...
Babzy.B said…
i 've learnt one more word "drabble " Do the words in the title of the drabble are part of the 100?
Interesting exercise:)
KL said…
A perfect start for a great work of fiction or novel. But please finish it. I don't like those work of literature, fiction, novels where the ending is unfinished - to get the answer you have to sit and analyze and then it can be either this or that...(feel like crying). A long story short:
your drabble and writing style is great, but I don't think I will like drabble as again it leaves so many questions unanswered. SORRY :-(
Kris McCracken said…
G, it's an interesting form to try.
Kris McCracken said…
Priyanka, you let me know when you've done one and I will give feedback!
Kris McCracken said…
Miles, you could do an ode to Big Ms.

Do they only make them in fruit box containers these days? That just seems un-Australian...
Kris McCracken said…
Babzy, I have assumed that they do, but I must admit, I'm not sure what the canon thinks.

I know that some people argue that a drabble is anything under 1,000 words, but they are just plain WRONG.
Kris McCracken said…
KL, great literature can't answer all of the questions, in my mind. You have to involve the reader somehow, otherwise it becomes a passive exercise.

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