Saturday, January 15, 2011

your slightest look easily will unclose me

A lovely girl reclines to ruminate upon matters nautical. Clifton Beach, December 2010.

Sometimes (only sometimes) e.e. says the things that I wanted to say. Only with less punctuation and more oddly spaced sentences.

somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond, by e.e.cummings

somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond
any experience,your eyes have their silence:
in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,
or which i cannot touch because they are too near

your slightest look easily will unclose me
though i have closed myself as fingers,
you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens
(touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose

or if your wish be to close me,i and
my life will shut very beautifully,suddenly,
as when the heart of this flower imagines
the snow carefully everywhere descending;

nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
the power of your intense fragility: whose texture
compels me with the colour of its countries,
rendering death and forever with each breathing

(i do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens;only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
nobody,not even the rain, has such small hands


Roddy said...

I think you have to be there to appreciate.

Kris said...